Behind the Mirror
I look at my reflection
I don't notice my eyes, skin, nose, or lips...
All I see are mistakes and regrets...
As I look at the person before me
I can't help but wish I chose a different path
Moisture fills my eyes and I look away
Unable to continue to face reality
Attempting to deny the person that I am
The person I have become
My reflection is the same everywhere I go
I can't get away
The eyes that stare back at me are unbearable
Let me go, Let me go.
vagueness needs to be edited:
-lacks feeling
-lacks visualization(what do the regrets and mistakes look like? only the main character knows. what path did she take? what has she become? what happened to her?
vagueness needs to be edited:
-lacks feeling
-lacks visualization(what do the regrets and mistakes look like? only the main character knows. what path did she take? what has she become? what happened to her?
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